An Excerpt from Waiting for Hope

Waiting for Hope
by Karen J. Hasley

"As a matter of fact, you do have something streaked across your forehead,"-I reached up to rub it off-"but that's not why I seemed to be staring. My mother described you a little differently, a little-well, older, so I was just surprised. I'm John Thomas Davis."

I reached out a hand to shake his, then drew it back apologetically.

"I'm insulating," I said by way of explaining my dirty hands. "I had too good a view of the stars last night, so I thought I could make it a little cozier with some well applied mud. Goodness knows I have enough of that."

He laughed as he turned to loop his reins around the saddlehorn. "It's the season for mud, at least until the next snowfall and freeze."

"You mean there's a chance there'll be more snow?"

The gray-haired man on the wagon seat gave a hoot. "There's three seasons in Wyoming: winter, July, and August. You can count on more snow."

"Then all the more reason for me to get snug before it comes."

John Thomas said, "That's Curly on the wagon and Tony behind me. My mother sent some things over for you and said you might need a little help getting settled." I looked into the wagon and gasped.

"She must have sent over half your house. I can't accept all this."

He ignored my protest and reached for a box, saying as he did so, "Miss Birdwell, we've all learned this early on so you might as well, too, if you're going to live in the neighborhood: Don't argue with my mother when she sets her mind on something."

The men unloaded a small iron bed frame with a straw-stuffed mattress, a sturdy little table with two chairs, a box of foodstuffs that included eggs, butter, and a loaf of fresh bread, a large stack of old newspapers, another box of assorted household items, and a variety of clothes, including the coat Lou Davis had promised. They unloaded firewood, too, and stacked it under the lean-to roof.

That finished, John Thomas stood back to examine the cabin from the outside carefully. "Is it just me or does the place tilt a little?"

"I'm tempted to say I don't notice a thing just to see your expression, but I'm afraid you're right. It does list to the south. Unless it's the hills in the background that are crooked."

He looked at me quickly, caught my expression, and smiled in return, the nicest smile I'd ever seen, warm and slow and reaching his eyes in a way that gave my stomach a flutter, as if I'd swallowed a butterfly.

"Well, we'll see what we can do. We'll tighten up the roof, put the doors on straight with good hinges and latches, and clean out the chimney so you can use your fireplace."

"Yes, I think I had some kind of furry companion in there. I heard it rustling around during the night."

"I hope that didn't bother you too much."

"I've learned not to let most things bother me," I replied, "and creatures whose only fault is their desire to escape the cold are in that category."

The three men worked all morning, eventually chasing a long, brown creature with black eyes and feet out of the chimney.

"A ferret," remarked John Thomas with surprise. "I never knew one to be so far above ground. It wouldn't have hurt you."

I thought so, too, watching the poor little creature scamper away. We could have shared the warmth easily enough. It had been here first, after all, and should have some rights.

By mid-afternoon they were done. John Thomas Davis stood in front of the cabin, from his expression clearly not completely satisfied.

"The place needs more work, but I think this will get you through until summer."

"It's a wonderful improvement!" I exclaimed. "I don't know how to thank you!"

The building seemed like a new cabin to me, with a fire burning in the fireplace and the little bed and table real furniture. For a moment tears of happiness pricked at the back of my eyes, and I turned away so he wouldn't see them. All my life I'd been considered an odd girl and realizing that was so had never bothered me before, but for some reason, I didn't want John Thomas Davis to think of me that way.

Outside Curly and Tony had already started off, but John Thomas held back for a moment.

"Please thank your mother for me and return this to her," I requested, handing him her coat from the day before. "She was much too generous with everything. I'm very obliged. And thank you, too. This must be the western hospitality I've read about."

"Do you really think you're going to make it here all right? Wyoming's not always bright and blue-skied like today, you know. And you ought to have a rifle with you, just to keep the coyotes away." I looked at him in amazement.

"I wouldn't know what to do with a rifle if I had one. I could probably figure out which end to hold and which end to aim but that's about it. I'm not sure I could shoot anything, either."

He adjusted his hat and pulled himself into the saddle.

"I'll come back and show you sometime. My mother and both my sisters are good shots. It's something you ought to know, too." Then he gave me that surprised, quizzical look he'd had upon first meeting me. "You're not what I expected, Miss Birdwell, I'll say that."

"I can't comment since I don't know what it was you expected, but I hope I'm not a disappointment. And please call me Hope."

"Disappointment is the last word I'd use," he told me seriously before he rode away.

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"Highlighting the fundamentals of love, hope, and faith in community, Lily's Sister is a novel of historical fiction that focuses on one woman's strength of character in the face of some very challenging circumstances. By…the first person perspective, Karen J. Hasley has brought forth a unique -- albeit, fictionalized -- voice from the past: a woman of integrity and determination, of stubbornness and pride."

"It is the epilogue of Lily's Sister that is truly exceptional, however, as it goes above and beyond the requisite happy ending and shows a piercingly lovely (and achingly realistic) glimpse of a life lived and loved well. The conflicts and struggles which Lou and John Rock Davis endure -- and triumph over -- may not be unique to the genre, but Karen J. Hasley is supremely suited to the telling of admirable, factually-inspired tales of amazing women and the love(s) they are willing to fight for."

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"I love historical romances, but most unfortunately are very formulaic - you can pretty much guess the ending after the first chapter. Not so with Lily's Sister! The twists and turns in this book made it nearly impossible to put down. I fell in love with the heroine - her courage, her compassion. The writing was insightful and intelligent. Hasley is a truly gifted author. I will definitely be looking for more books from her!"

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"The book really flowed and I couldn't wait to see what happened to Louisa in every chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next book. Your long epilogue was unique and very nice. One always wonders what happens to the characters (who become real to the reader) after the end of the story. So thanks for an excellent read."

ML, Florida

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